A Time Apart: Scene 1, Shot 1 Clean Up

I have given it a go at cleaning up and refining the animation for the very first scene of my film. Improvements made: the way Doris turns, Fred's eye darts so it looks like he is looking out the window at passing objects, their rocking with the train I've tried to make better, I've put in/tweaked slow ins and slow outs in the graph editor for both characters to make it look like the characters are flowing through poses rather than locking which was what was making it look mechanical before... In comparison to my last post for this shot, I think it has improved??? ... I hope it has.