A Time Apart: End of Act 1 Blocked/Roughed Out

Today I have been working on the ending of Act 1, here's what I have roughed out for me to come back too at the end, (there was another shot I did that was in my pre viz but it didn't work so I've cut it). Also I've cut out a line from the script ("We haven't got all day") because I felt like it was unnecessary to add/keep, when I come back to this shot I may put it back in or change the animation to work with it.

The first bit, the shots will be changed to include a better shot of their heart broken faces. What I'm trying to tell is Doris has to go, they both hadn't realised that Fred can't go with her, Doris being the older protective sister doesn't want to leave him but Fred decides to hide his upset and let her go. </3