A Time Apart: Pre Viz Progress 9 - Act 1 Redo (No Sound)

Today I've been retelling the separation scene in the second half of Act 1. I've tried to tell it as though it's a surprise and panic to both of them that they're being separated and that it's hard for them to part. Doris realises before Fred does. I don't know if I've achieved what I wanted too which was a sense of panic and heartbreak at being separated, making it easy to imagine what they would have felt. Maybe I need quicker shots or whether sound can add the element I feel is maybe missing.

Moving on to Act 2 and eventually Act 3.