Progress 4 has been my attempt to work out the scene where Doris and Fred get separated in a church hall, this scene is very important for building up emotion and sympathy for Fred as it's the first time in his life he would have been separated from his sister. I used my own emotional experiences to try and understand what my Grandad went through and how he would have felt, my Mum told me that on my first day of school I had clung to her and wouldn't let her go when I realised she was going home without me, I vaguely remember it but unlike my character he doesn't cause a scene or have a tantrum but accepts it, goes into submission and cries in the corner curled up in a ball until someone approaches him to take him away.
In my animatic, I was happy with these panels because I felt they expressed emotion and I feel emotion towards these drawings as a sequence. But when I pre vized it something felt a bit off and I can't tell what - below the panels are screenshots of my scene set up variations. It could be Moom that's throwing me off a bit, I will revisit this scene to figure it out completely.
good stuff, Paris - keep going!
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