- I've decided that I'm not going to include their father in it, just keep it to Fred, Doris and Rosa. (The Dad only appears in the family photo in the first shot).
- Fred never speaks.
- I'm not sure if I should keep scene 5.
- A Small Evacuee
- A Time Apart
- Torn Apart
- Twice Torn Apart (Because he was evacuated twice)
Next steps: Start drawing visuals/shots and design Rosa.
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