- Mother working in lab/cellar on robot, camera zooms out of room to outside the closed door that has a do not disturb sign.
- Daughter holding diary in front of the front door looks opposite at the sign and *sighs* and sits on the bottom of the stairs crying, then just suddenly stops. She begins to write in the diary when she's done she puts the diary down on the stair table and gets up in a trance, she walks out the room but the camera doesn't follow instead it looks at the diary and then the clock on the wall. *fades to black*.
- At the park, the daughter is on the edge of a mini dock at a lake where the daughter falls in.
- *Few days later*
- Back in the cellar we watch the mother struggle to concentrate on her work because of her guilt, we watch her go to the stairs and sit where the daughter was, she notices the diary on the table in the corner, she takes it and hugs the diary. The mother jumps up with an idea and rushes down to the cellar to the robot she was working on in the first scene.
- In the cellar she scans every part of the diary and some software on the computer extracts quotes and forms a speech database. The mother programmes the robot and it comes to life, she begins to ask questions she knows the answer to thanks to the diary. The short conversation starts off sweet and quickly turns deep, the robot storms out back to the lake, the mother doesn't realise straight away what's happening she just stands in the cellar staring into space deep in thought before realising what's about to happen.
- Back at the lake, the robot is on the edge like the daughter was, the mother is on the path not near the robot, she doesn't say anything, the robot begins to quote from the suicide note before watching the robot fall in from the mother's pov.
- Final shot is a slow zoom on the diary.
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Wednesday, 1 February 2017
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