Pitch Reflective Statement

I'm very pleased with my feedback, it has been a real confidence boost and made me eager to see this project to the end.

Positives: 

1. Liked the playfulness of it.
2. My pre production forms a nice frame work for production.
3. Loved the poem.
4. I've nailed the style and the Dr Seuss universe, I've grabbed all the right things for this.
5. Pitched content just right and was satisfying to watch.

Advice:

1. Line work could be even more sketchier.
2. Ditch the cell line art test, keep it still.
3. Chromosomes in anaphase give them a pop movement like with cytokinesis.
4. Add in sounds for stage tags.

Next steps: Find a voice narrator - set up a negotiation and begin production after discussing with Jordan and Simon how I'm going to take this into maya. I have a little/basic idea at the moment.